The Main Parts of a Business Letter


The Heading

The Inside address

The Salutation

The Body

The Closing

The Signature


The Heading

If you do NOT use letterhead stationery, the heading is located at the top right of the page and includes the writer's complete mailing address and the date.

e.g.

 

*******Laboratory
Technical Development Group
Kobe Steel Ltd
5-5 Takatsukadai 1-chome
Nishi-ku
Kobe
Hyogo
Japan 651-2271
March 21 1997

 

If you DO use letterhead stationery, the address is already printed on the paper; only the date must be added, at least two spaces below.

e.g.

 

KOBE STEEL LTD.
*******Laboratory, Technical Development Group, 5-5 Takatsukadai 1-chome
Nishi-ku, Kobe, Hyogo, Japan 651-2271

March 21 1997

 

When writing the date, it is best to state MONTH, DAY, YEAR, in that order as above. Using the short form of the date i.e. 7/10/96 can sometimes be confusing. In some countries 7/10/96 means October 7, 1996.

The heading above is in Semi-Block form. See Layouts to see the Block form.

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The Inside Address

The inside address is always placed even with the left margin (left justified) and at least two (2) spaces below the heading.

It contains the full name of the person being written to - including a proper title - (see Salutations below) and the complete mailing address.

e.g.

Dr. Frederick Johnston, Senior Researcher
Materials Research Laboratory
NUCOR
1649 Telegraph Road
Crawfordsville, IN 58936
USA

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The Salutation

All letters begin with a salutation or greeting. It is placed two spaces below the inside address and even with the left margin. Most people still use 'Dear__' to open their letters. When you have a person's name in the inside address, use the name in the salutation. When you do not have a name use 'Dear Sir' or 'Dear Madam'. When you are addressing a firm or a group of men you can use 'Gentlemen'. Use of the correct title is important. Look at the chart below:

 Addressee

 American Style

 British Style

 Tom Smith

 Dear Mr. Smith:

  Dear Mr Smith,
Susan Fox, PhD  Dear Dr. Fox: Dear Dr Fox,
Mary Lane Dear Ms. Lane:  Dear Ms Lane, 

Note that the American style has a period after the title ( Mr. Dr. Ms.). It also uses a colon (:). The British style does not have a period after the title and uses a comma (,).

Ms. or Ms (pronounced Miz) is now in common use as a female equivalent to Mr. However, if possible, it is best to find out which title the woman herself prefers (Ms. or Mrs. or Miss)

All of the examples above are in formal style which should be used for all business letters. Use of the first name (Dear Tom, Dear Sue, etc) is only for informal, personal letters.

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The Body

The body of the letter, or its message, begins two spaces below the salutation. It is structured in paragraphs, which may or may not be indented, depending on the layout used. See 'Layouts'.

Hints on structure:

1) Expressing thanks for a favour done.

 to someone who invited you somewhere

 Thank you for inviting me to...
 to someone who called you

Thank you for calling me...
 to someone who took you to dinner

Thank you for taking me to dinner...
 to someone who helped you

Thank you for helping me with...

 

2) Writing about future events.

 you plan to meet someone

I look forward to meeting you...

 you want to receive a reply

I look forward to your reply...

you plan to visit someone

I look forward to my visit...

someone plans to visit you

I look forward to your visit...

 you plan to attend a conference

I look forward to the conference...

 

3) When writing to someone you have not met, let the person know why you are familiar with him or her.

 you saw someone's presentation

I had the pleasure of attending your presentation at...
 you read someone's article

I read your article in the .... with interest...
 you saw someone's poster session

I had the opportunity to see your poster session at ....
  you participated in someone's workshop

I had the pleasure of participating in your workshop at...


4) When asking for a favour, leave the person as much time as possible. Nevertheless, if you expect to have a reply within a certain time, make that request specific.

Please let me know as soon as possible. 
Please call by the end of July. 
Please visit us at your earliest convenience.
Please reply by fax before September 10.

 

5) Referral statements.

telephone

Please do not hesitate to telephone us...

get in touch

Please get in touch with our representative in...

send further enquiries

Please send further enquiries to... at the following address...

someone plans to visit you

I look forward to your visit...

contact

Please contact... at the following address...

 

6) Tone.

A business relationship can often become fairly informal. If you find yourself in this situation, you can alter the tone of your business correspondence from impersonal to personal.

Impersonal Personal
Thank you very much (for your help)... Thanks a lot (for your help)...
I appreciated (your recommendations)... Thanks for (your recommendations)...
Please give my regards to (your secretary)... Tell (your secretary) I said 'Hello'...
I look forward to (seeing you next month)... It'll be good to (see you next month)...

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The Closing

The closing of a business letter is placed two spaces below the body. It is a conventional expression, indicating the formal close of the letter. The first word is capitalized. Closings end with a comma.

American Style

British Style

Very Formal

Respectfully,

Respectfully yours,

 Yours respectfully,
Formal

Sincerely,

Sincerely yours,

Yours truly,

 Yours faithfully,

(with Dear Sir/Madam)

Yours sincerely,

(with Dear Mr.../ Ms...)
Informal

All the best,

Regards,

 Best wishes,

All the best,

 

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The Signature

Every letter should have a handwritten signature. Four to six spaces below this is the typewritten signature. A woman may include (Miss), (Mrs.) or (Ms.) to the right of the typewritten signature.

 

 Fujio Yamada
four to six spaces  
 

Fujio Yamada 


 Keiko Suzuki
four to six spaces  

 ( ) optional

Keiko Suzuki (Ms.)


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Special Parts

Layouts

Example Business Letters